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this stupid race called life by ~dcgirl23:icondcgirl23:



Oh the world is a wonderful, fucked up place
Don’t stop to breathe
You’re still in the race

No time for mourning
Or to nurse a broken heart
No time to think of what you left at the start

This world has no patience
For your void, empty soul
Don’t you know death is life’s ultimate goal?

Forget what he said…
His lips, his eyes, his hands...
Hello?! The world is spinning
You’re still in demand!

Forget your bruised conscious, wasted kisses, broken past
You’re still not moving quick enough
You’re coming up last

Don’t think about the nagging guilt that weighs down every step
Ignore the tortured voices that hit you right and left
You do know self-indulgence is a sure fire path to sin?
How dare you stop you cry, you’re never going to win!

So your breathings getting ragged
Your sick heart beating fit to burst
And no amount of whispered love
Will ever quench your thirst

Yes I see your eyes much clearer now
The pain is quite reflective
I guess we can cut your heart out
And mark it as defective

Your technique has no style or flair
The score cards all say zero
How selfish of you to stop now!
No one likes a fallen hero

Get up, don’t stop, work harder now
Don’t even stop to bleed
Be better, be beautiful, get smarter now

SHUT UP AND LET ME
Breathe…
©2004-2009 ~dcgirl23
:icondcgirl23:

Author's Comments

one of those times im so numb to feeling anything and the world demands endurance...i cant give anymore

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:iconskateoftheheart:
i'm breathless too. +fav

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:iconskateoftheheart:
oh yea check out poetrehab

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the penguin war is cool.
the poet rehab is cool.
the music is cool.
the art is cool.
the pretty is cool.
the plants is cool.
the room is cool.
the cigarettes is cool.
the cancerous is cool.
:iconbriannangel:
how the fuck do you keep doing that? that's what i tried to get across in my poem "what a fucked up old world" only, you do it better! lol, damn you! haha. luv it!!
B. :butterflytwo:
:iconqueenhrosie:
Ha, gotta love ~skateoftheheart with the shameless plug for ~poetrehab

YAY.

Love the poem, hun. I shall be +watchin'!

*peers around the corner*

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I hear
your voice
down the hall, through the window, above
all those trees, a light
it seems
& you are singing. What song
is that The words
are beautiful.

-LeRoi Jones
:iconbeat-the-man:
What a lucky kid, you get my 1st Fave ever, congratulations champ this is a very awesome peice.. but doesnt it suck that sometimes the ones that hurt the most to write get the most response?
:icondcgirl23:
haha so im definately awesome plus now aye sport ! maybe even, dare i say it, awesome plus squared?
and yeah, very true that comment...
:iconhandheadman:
That's the way I see it. I've quit the race for now and started walking in my own direction. Unfortunately it's a little harder to pay the bills, but I do breathe better.

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"It is only with the heart that one sees rightly. The essential is invisible to the eye."
:earth: Web Site :bulletgreen: :gallery: Gallery
:iconnakeddancingllama:
an absolutely amazing poem that i totally relate to 100%, good work :gummybear:

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:butterflytwo: Sweetest Downfall :butterflytwo:
:iconwhymebeacause:
came back to some favorites.... still love this one

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I wish I had all the world to write, instead of just having all the world.

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